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Title: The Truth is Out There?
Author: borgmama1of5
Summary: Once in a while, things work out right.
Spoilers: none; can be anytime
Wordcount: 900
Disclaimer: Not mine, or I would feed them pie.
Gen, no pairing
Rating: G

 

For the [livejournal.com profile] spnquotefic :
1.19 Provenance
SARAH: No. No, I was seeing things. It's impossible.
DEAN: Yeah, well, welcome to our world.

I really didn’t want to believe. I wanted to be positive they were conning me with an outlandish story. 

Trouble was, I couldn’t quite convince myself of that. 

Maura has always said I’m too damn gullible. Actually, I’ve been told that by several people in my life.  

In my defense, I’ve said that I’d rather be taken advantage of once in a while than be cynical and suspicious about everyone. 

So I was listening to them, and trying to figure out what the truth was.

“I’m having a really hard time with what you’re telling me, boys.” 

The floppy-haired one kept his implausibly earnest eyes right on me. As he brushed his hair back, I could see a faded purple bruise on his cheekbone. 

“I understand this is hard to accept, Mrs. Crawford. But we need you to give us that pendant. Like my brother explained, it can be used to summon … spirits … harmful ones, and –

I interrupted. “Here’s why I don’t believe you boys. That charm’s been in my family for generations, why, I’ve got a picture of my great-great-grandmother wearing it, for heaven’s sake! If it was dangerous, attracted these ‘bad spirits,’ as you put it, how come my family’s never had anything really bad happen to us? Shouldn’t there be stories of awful things connected with it? Something tragic or mysterious?

The other one answered. “Actually, you should feel very lucky that no one – no thing – knew where it was.”

His voice was deeper, less cajoling, but he was no less trying to charm me with those green eyes. And I had to admit that a much younger me would have been flattered to have his attention, even if he was a bit scruffy around the edges. I know that five-o’clock-shadow thing is all the rage, but I’ve always preferred a clean-shaven man. To be fair, though, his not-recently-shaved appearance didn’t seem an affectation, it was simply in keeping with his overall worn-out look. Which, now that I was looking at him more closely, included a couple of nasty scrapes running from his temple to his jawline on one side. 

“Okay, now, Dean, and Sam, right?” They both nodded. Still keeping their eyes on me. 

“Here’s the truth. I don’t know whether to believe you or not. You have to admit, what you’re telling me is pretty off-the-wall. And you’re asking me to just give you a family heirloom …” 

I stopped, watching the look green-eyed one gave the other boy. Exasperated, a this-was-your-brilliant-idea look that I’d seen my own sons give each other often enough growing up. 

And really, they weren’t boys, they were young men. Like Paul and Matt. Of course, that’s why they seemed like boys to me, I realized. 

A question occurred to me.

“How did you know I had the pendant, anyway?” 

Sam looked a little embarrassed, like he’d gotten caught. 

“There was a drawing of it in a … reference book, and we tracked it down from the name Ezra Wallingford.” 

“Oh.” Well, that made sense, Wallingford was a name in the family tree. An old one.

“You must have some impressive genealogical research skill.” 

Dean smiled at that, and it transformed his face from scarily intense to meltingly brilliant. Clearly a compliment to his brother was better than saying something flattering about him.  

I didn’t mean to say it out loud. “You must be the older one.” 

He was a little startled, but it didn’t diminish the grin as he nodded. 

“Well,” I stood up, and they did the same. “Some people would say I’m just too naive, and I don’t really want to believe that there are evil spirits out there. Although that might be comforting than to think some of the awfulness in the world is not just the fault of us humans. Don’t know …” 

They followed as I walked to my bedroom. Great-great-grandma’s necklace was wrapped in silk in my jewelry box. I handed it to the older one. 

“Has it always been wrapped in this?” Sam asked.

“Yes, that’s how it was passed down.”

“That explains some of why your family hasn’t had problems. The silk dampens the energy it gives off, effectively hiding it from malevolent beings.” 

“So what happens to it now?” 

Dean had unwrapped it enough to see that it was what they were looking for, and then tucked it inside his jacket in an upper pocket. 

“We’re going to see that it’s destroyed, ma’am. So that it can never fall into the wrong hands.” 

“Well, then that’s that.” 

I escorted them to my front door, and as they stepped onto the front porch, something made me say, “I do appreciate you boys coming and asking, instead of just breaking in and stealing it. Though I’m guessing that that was your back-up plan?” 

I had the satisfaction of seeing a flash of surprise and guilt cross both their faces. Sam gave a look at his brother that could only be described as a bitchface, then said to me,

“Thank you for proving that sometimes people can be reasonable.” 

I watched them get in their big black car. 

Much as I didn’t want to believe, I think they were telling the truth.

 

 

Date: 2010-11-12 03:05 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] twirlycurls.livejournal.com
This was such fun! I love your OC and the outsider POV. I love getting an inside look at how various people Sam and Dean work their magic on are reacting to them and all their various charms and tells.

I really didn’t want to believe.
I insta-flashed to Fox Mulder here. Intentional?

Dean smiled at that, and it transformed his face from scarily intense to meltingly brilliant. Clearly a compliment to his brother was better than saying something flattering about him.
Both a perfect description of Dean's best smiles and a fantastic bit of characterization. I love it when outsiders realize how much Dean loves Sam.

I love the ending, too. This is a lot of awesome for just 900 words. :)

Date: 2010-11-12 03:18 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] borgmama1of5.livejournal.com
Thank you!

Never watched X-Files, although I know the catch-phrase.

I just wanted something nice for the boys tonight!

Date: 2010-11-12 03:07 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] vanillafluffy.livejournal.com
Great outsider POV! You might also consider posting it to [livejournal.com profile] bystanderfic.

Date: 2010-11-12 03:19 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] borgmama1of5.livejournal.com
Thanks for the suggestion! I will. I am fond of outsider POVs.

Date: 2010-11-12 03:43 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tifaching.livejournal.com
LOL, even OC's recognize Sam's proficiency at the bitchface! Loved this, especially Mrs. Crawford's compliment to Sam lighting Dean up.

Awesome!

Date: 2010-11-12 04:17 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] borgmama1of5.livejournal.com
Thanks! Wouldn't it be awesome to get a look at the boys from the outside?

Date: 2010-11-12 03:59 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] callistosh65.livejournal.com
That was a very nice slice of outsider POV - and a welcome shot back to S1 - thank you!

Date: 2010-11-12 04:19 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] borgmama1of5.livejournal.com
Thank you! I just wanted to give them something easy for a change!

Date: 2010-11-12 04:14 am (UTC)
ext_23814: sam (spn - keep each other human)
From: [identity profile] datenshiblue.livejournal.com
That felt exactly like an encounter with our boys, really, at any time.

I enjoyed it very much. <3

Date: 2010-11-12 04:20 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] borgmama1of5.livejournal.com
Thanks for stopping by to read!

Edition 1,689

Date: 2010-11-12 05:25 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] pingback-bot.livejournal.com
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Date: 2010-11-12 07:01 am (UTC)
daisychains1957: (Boys in suits 4x11)
From: [personal profile] daisychains1957
I RARELY read fan fics but decided to give this one a go and I have to say I really enjoyed it :D

I was put off most fic in my early days here because they all seemed to be Wincest or J2 and yet this sweet, and just so much our boys - thanks for a really nice read :D

Date: 2010-11-12 01:25 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] borgmama1of5.livejournal.com
Thanks for giving me a try! Glad you enjoyed!

I love to write stories that could fit in the cracks of the show, and preseries stuff that shows how the boys became the Sam and Dean we met in the pilot. So my stories are all Wincest-free :)

Date: 2010-11-12 07:27 am (UTC)
ext_29986: (dana scully rocks)
From: [identity profile] fannishliss.livejournal.com
this was a great casefile, short and sweet.

I am very surprised you never watched xfiles! the first two seasons at least are superb -- a lot like spn, but really, really scary. And of course Kim Manners really developed his style there. :)

Date: 2010-11-12 01:27 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] borgmama1of5.livejournal.com
While X-files ran, I was a Star Trek fan (though not an obsessive, like I am for SPN) and I am a one-show woman :)

Glad you liked this!

Date: 2010-11-12 07:33 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] heartlessbytchh.livejournal.com
Yay!Bytchh face and scruffage all in one story! Total win!
*flails*
Oh, and big black BAMF car.:D Even mo' betta.
Thank you for the story Borgmama.
:)

Date: 2010-11-12 01:27 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] borgmama1of5.livejournal.com
You're welcome! Thanks for letting me know it was fun for you!

Date: 2010-11-12 09:17 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fifimom.livejournal.com
nice way to start the day. thanks for writing and sharing.

Date: 2010-11-12 01:28 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] borgmama1of5.livejournal.com
Some Winchester with your coffee, eh?

Yes, sounds perfect :)

Thanks for stopping by!

Date: 2010-11-12 01:05 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lovetheguys.livejournal.com
I enjoy reading outside POV stories like this. I'm glad the lady gave them her pendant and chose to believe them. How often does THAT happen?

Nice little story, I enjoyed it!

Love,
Robin

Date: 2010-11-12 01:29 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] borgmama1of5.livejournal.com
Yeah, after the last story I figured I'd better give the boys a break!

Thanks for letting me know you liked it!

Date: 2010-11-12 03:17 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hezio2.livejournal.com
POUNCE!
I feel like a kitten and this is a ball of yarn. Love the pov Love the little details that add so much. Like how she compares Sam and Dean to her own sons, how she understands the pride in Dean's expression.
Was looking forward to reading something by you this week / today, so thaks for sharing this.

Date: 2010-11-12 04:56 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] borgmama1of5.livejournal.com
You made my day by telling me that you were looking forward to a new story!

It was so nice to write something good for the boys for a change...

(I will be posting my reverse big bang story on Tuesday, so you can get ready to pounce again! Thanks!)

Date: 2010-11-12 03:46 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jensenrick.livejournal.com
Good stuff!

Date: 2010-11-12 04:57 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] borgmama1of5.livejournal.com
Thanks for letting me know you liked it!

Date: 2010-11-12 04:58 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] landrews.livejournal.com
Yayz for outsider POV! I love her observations of the boys - you picked just the right characteristics to really bring this scene to life. Thanks for sharing!

Date: 2010-11-12 05:48 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] borgmama1of5.livejournal.com
Thank you!

I was writing this from my own perspective of the boys being about the ages of my daughters. :)

Date: 2010-11-12 06:08 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] irismay42.livejournal.com
I love outsider POV stories, and that was awesome! Your narrator was really endearing too, and I loved the ways she saw through the boys by comparing them to her own sons - especially the way she figured out Dean was the oldest. Aww.

Date: 2010-11-12 06:15 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] borgmama1of5.livejournal.com
Glad you liked this little 'slice of life' that wasn't painful for a change!

Date: 2010-11-12 08:23 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] just-ruth.livejournal.com
Hee! I can just see Angela Landsbury playing Mrs. Crawford (CW could never afford the guest casts in my mind).

Very nice! Thank you for posting!

Date: 2010-11-12 08:41 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] borgmama1of5.livejournal.com
Oh, she would have fun with the boys!

Thanks for reading!

Date: 2010-11-12 09:12 pm (UTC)
saphirablue: (Supernatural)
From: [personal profile] saphirablue
That's a great Outsider POV of our boys! :)

Thank you very much!

Date: 2010-11-12 10:34 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] borgmama1of5.livejournal.com
Thank you for letting me know you liked it!

Date: 2010-11-15 12:25 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tversan.livejournal.com
I love outsiders POV and this was perfect. Thanks for sharing this lovely fic!

Date: 2010-11-15 12:53 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] borgmama1of5.livejournal.com
You're welcome! Thanks for reading!

Date: 2011-01-17 05:08 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] brigid-tanner.livejournal.com
Love outsider POV, especially when she recognized a bitchface! LOL!!

Really liked this part:

Dean smiled at that, and it transformed his face from scarily intense to meltingly brilliant. Clearly a compliment to his brother was better than saying something flattering about him.

I didn’t mean to say it out loud. “You must be the older one.”
Great description of Dean, and of course, it gives him away as the eldest.

Date: 2011-01-17 07:11 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] borgmama1of5.livejournal.com
I'm tickled you enjoyed this--thanks for letting me know!

Date: 2011-10-25 10:01 pm (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
I wish it could be sometimes that easy in the Winchester world *sighs*.
But then again, the difficult is just a Halloween disguise for fun. .

A very nice read. And also, OPVs are love.

Date: 2011-10-25 10:44 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] borgmama1of5.livejournal.com
Thank you, anonymous person! :)

I just thought they deserved one easy job!

Date: 2011-10-26 11:48 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] judith-88-g.livejournal.com
It' me *waves*
LJ just took the very moment of posting the comment to log me out. Tricky bastard!
*kicks LJ*
*looks at LJ lying on the floor*
*takes pity*
*pets LJ*

Date: 2012-06-26 10:09 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ghostmonsters.livejournal.com
Great outsider insight into the brothers' dynamics. Loved it :)

Date: 2012-06-26 10:28 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] borgmama1of5.livejournal.com
Thanks for stopping by and letting me know you enjoyed this!

Date: 2015-10-18 02:16 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shinybiancachu.livejournal.com
Liked that Sam and Dean had a backup plan and that Mrs. Crawford knew about it.

Date: 2015-10-18 02:35 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] borgmama1of5.livejournal.com
I'm glad they didn't have to use it, though!

Date: 2015-12-10 02:19 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ferlonda.livejournal.com
You're probably getting bored with me saying over and over again how much I like your writing... This is particularly nice, though- a window on The Boys from the outside... So accurate to how I perceive their relationship and their way of working... Anyway, loved it!

Date: 2015-12-10 04:55 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] borgmama1of5.livejournal.com
I think you are very generous to leave a comment on each story--I write because I need to read a story that isn't out there, so I don't feel that I am 'owed' comments--but man, they do feel good to get!

Date: 2015-12-15 12:27 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ferlonda.livejournal.com
Well, I know how I'd feel if I sent someone a story and got only crickets in return. :)

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